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A tender hand glanced down her fondling a butt cheek .“I've found some antiseptic cream. Is it bad?”
“Thanks. I'll survive.”
“I've heard of falling for someone, but that's ridiculous!”
Friday is the time for a flash. A one hundred word piece of flash fiction, inspired by a given picture. A group of awesome writers take part in this challenge. Please show some love by clicking the link, reading and commenting on their work. It means so much. http://flasherfictionfriday.blogspot.com Leaning over the dresser, Linda propped herself on one elbow and peered into the mirror. Gently easing her hair back, the cut became more visible. She tipped little water from the jug into the bowl, then dampening her handkerchief she patted it gingerly on her face, cleaning up the wound. Linda flinched, though it was her pride hurting most. Linda never noticed Sam enter the room.
A tender hand glanced down her fondling a butt cheek .“I've found some antiseptic cream. Is it bad?” “Thanks. I'll survive.” “I've heard of falling for someone, but that's ridiculous!”
14 Comments
4/3/2015 12:14:55 pm
Love the way you turned this into something totally different than I expected! Great job, Naomi. Nice quick twist at the end :-)
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Naomi Shaw
4/3/2015 01:41:20 pm
Glad you liked it Dariel, thank you
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4/3/2015 12:21:55 pm
Interesting take on the picture. At the end, I'm wondering how bad did he fall on her. Sound accidental, but I'm curious.
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Naomi Shaw
4/3/2015 01:43:15 pm
I think there is a longer story to tell here, I'll hold on to the idea. Thanks for your kind comment Ray
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4/3/2015 03:43:59 pm
Heh, a nice little unexpected twist at the end there, Naomi. Makes me wonder what happened :-)
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Naomi Shaw
4/4/2015 02:42:09 am
Thanks Doris, I think there's a longer story to tell
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4/3/2015 05:11:05 pm
Naomi, you old salt! You got me completely. I thought a little summin' summin' got rough, but she was just graceless. How many times has that happened when we were trying to act sexy? Great teaser. Guess you are back......xo
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Naomi Shaw
4/4/2015 02:43:46 am
Yes, I'm back, and ideas are flying around. Glad you like this one
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Michaela Rhua
4/4/2015 12:15:39 am
Great teaser Naomi.
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Naomi Shaw
4/4/2015 02:44:37 am
Thanks Michaela
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Angelica Dawson
4/4/2015 08:02:49 am
Oh no. Someone has a bruised ego to match her tailbone? Great use of the picture, very funny.
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Naomi Shaw
4/4/2015 03:00:20 pm
Thanks Angelica. Glad it made you laugh
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AuroraRose Andromeda
4/6/2015 02:07:25 am
Awesome flash! Full of emotion with that twist at the end. Made the hair on my arms stand up as I read the short flash. Def want to know more about these two. She is one strong woman.
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Naomi Shaw
4/6/2015 02:45:54 am
Thanks Aurora. There's a longer story here somewhere, begging to be written
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