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Suddenly she heard heavy footsteps, and a chain rattling. A deep voice spoke.
“So, my haughty one. Have you learned your lesson? Or do I punish you further?”
A tear ran down her cheek.
Friday is the time for a flash. A one hundred word piece of flash fiction, inspired by a given picture. A group of awesome writers take part in this challenge. Please show some love by clicking the link, reading and commenting on their work. It means so much. http://flasherfictionfriday.blogspot.com Valerie perched cross legged precariously in her little black dress on the box. Her long auburn locks tumbled over her shoulder. She had wrists bound behind her, and a blindfold denied her of all sight. Nevertheless, feeling the sun's warmth, that fell upon her slender body, she tilted her head in the hope of just one glimpse under the blindfold. Nothing. Valerie felt so alone.
Suddenly she heard heavy footsteps, and a chain rattling. A deep voice spoke. “So, my haughty one. Have you learned your lesson? Or do I punish you further?” A tear ran down her cheek.
10 Comments
12/5/2014 10:40:07 am
Lovely. Your first paragraph is beautifully scripted with wonderful visuals. I feel her isolation. Xo
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Naomi
12/5/2014 02:35:20 pm
Thank you so much Muffy. So glad you enjoyed
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12/6/2014 03:13:19 pm
Oh my, what has she done to deserve this? Great flash :-)
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Naomi
12/8/2014 08:00:52 am
That's wehat I wondered too. Thanks for your kind comment Doris
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12/8/2014 02:09:04 pm
Oh wow, what did she do to deserve this? Nice flash Naomi.
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Naomi
12/9/2014 01:28:23 am
I'll have to think up something. Thanks Ray
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AuroraRose Andromeda
12/8/2014 09:13:38 pm
Mmmm Wow! So full of emotion! I loved this, I want to know more even why she was punished in the first place. What has she done? Awesome piece.
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Naomi
12/9/2014 01:30:17 am
Thanks Aurora, glad you enjoyed. I think I will have to extend this one, it leaves unanswered questions
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12/9/2014 11:15:08 am
Beautifully written but i'd love to know the reason for her punishment
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Naomi
12/9/2014 12:23:37 pm
Thanks for your kind comment Julez
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