http://flasherfictionfriday.blogspot.com
Carey made her notes and next morning wrote the report. She was the best employee that they had at Shadows Detective Agency.
Friday is the time for a flash. A one hundred word piece of flash fiction, inspired by a given picture. A group of awesome writers take part in this challenge. Please show some love by clicking the link, reading and commenting on their work. It means so much http://flasherfictionfriday.blogspot.com Carey stood out of the way, unseen by anyone who passed. Lady of shadows, masked by her long dark tresses, veiled by the night. She saw all, however, and remembered everything. Secrets, shrouded in the day, emerged at nightfall. Lady of shadows always collected. She had a knack for it. Her eyes widened. Highly trained for night vision. Stealthy as a cat, she changed position to be sure of the assailant. She bit her lip and remained silent.
Carey made her notes and next morning wrote the report. She was the best employee that they had at Shadows Detective Agency.
12 Comments
1/23/2015 11:28:40 am
Very creative, Naomi! Had me thinking she was about to attack, then she turns out to be a detective. Great flash! Now I want to know why she's investigating and for whom ;-)
Reply
Naomi Shaw
1/23/2015 11:33:02 am
Thanks Dariel. So glad you enjoyed it. Who knows, I might drop this into a longer story somewhere!
Reply
1/23/2015 12:45:42 pm
Oh, I love it. I was expecting a different ending, so you completely got me :-)
Reply
Naomi Shaw
1/23/2015 12:49:00 pm
You know how I love a twist Doris. Thanks for the lovely comment
Reply
Naomi Shaw
1/23/2015 02:12:55 pm
Thank you so much for your encouraging comment Theresa x
Reply
1/23/2015 01:40:59 pm
That was fabulous, Naomi! I also felt as tho she was about to pounce and attack, using herself as bait. Who knows, maybe she uses the shroud of night and the cloak of detective to satisfy her own wicked needs. Whatever she does, you reflected it beautifully and had me totally hooked, my mind racing to find answers. Your descriptions were pure poetry in prose. I loved this flash. xo
Reply
Naomi Shaw
1/23/2015 02:16:14 pm
Oh Muffy what a wonderful comment. It is you who keep encouraging me to push myself so much. I'm glad you enjoyed this xx
Reply
1/23/2015 05:07:25 pm
Naomi! Wonderful visuals yet again! Very poetically flowing...
Reply
Naomi Shaw
1/23/2015 05:15:55 pm
Thank you so much Debra for your generous comment
Reply
Naomi Shaw
1/26/2015 02:12:27 am
I appreciate your comment Ray, glad you liked it
Reply
Leave a Reply. |
Categories
All
Archives
February 2016
|